Miss laurelle was done with graphite pencil F, HB, B, and 2B on coldpress water color paper. This portrait was done with full pernission of the model Miss Laurelle. Photos of the model Miss Laurelle can be found at www.misslaurelle.com.
its true that at first its hard to see. I finally was able to put my finger on it. the right eye is the problem. The other one is very expressive.. very human. the right one...id say its the top arc.
A friend wanted to add that she likes the right eye: she looks confident since it gives the impression that shes looking right at you. Also wanted to add that the left eye looks like she hasnt much self confidence. that she's melancolic. either ways your drawing is lovely.